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I have mixed feelings about this latest update, but I'm hopeful it will pay off! I definitely wasn't expecting what we have so far, and I'm excited for what comes next.

I like this VN a lot so far, and I think one of my favorite things yet is the world-building. I think the story was good at getting me invested and informing me what I need to know without being overwhelming. In particular, it's easy to get familiar with the characters very quickly, and I appreciate that!

The only thing I didn't like in particular about this VN is the flip-flopping at the beginning. I think when you get used to the back-and-forth with the past and present, it's okay. But at the beginning, I was very confused what was going on and what the story was about. If I were to change it, I might try to make the flip-flopping in the early game slower and more obvious to give the reader time to get into the motion of things.

Keep it up, looking forward to what's in store!

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I hope the VN has 3 routers: one with Ranzkai, one with Cadgan, and the final one with both Cadgan and Ranzkai. XD

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*Laughs malevolently*

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bruh i thought we were supposed to be dating cadgan, not the demon. now i got all mixed emotions here lmao

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*Spoilers for Build 0.2*

Man I'm already so endeared to Ranzkai after that last chapter, maybe we got this demon thing all wrong right?

great job guys :D

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I'm on team demon daddy

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peak

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Not sure if it's me but it looks like the download link for Android hasn't been updated yet as I still get the Version 1 update. :/

I downloaded it and it's the right version. It might be something on your end

Oh yeah it did work nvm haha... i just saw it say download again and i immediately thought it was the old link... thx a bunch for checking it though :))

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Can't d download build 2 bruhh

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Absolutely adore what's here so far, PLEASE tell me there'll be a route for you know who as well, love those sorta stories so much! P.S. - A little funny that I know just how easily temptable I am now

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There won't be routes in the classical furry VN sense, in Devil's you'll engage more or MUCH MORE certain characters :P

Just finished what is available of the Demo; I have to say, it's really great! The art is gorgeous, the writing and dialogue are well done, and the plot is entertaining. My one complaint would be that, for a visual novel, it seems to be geared more towards the novel part than the game part. 

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We wanted to focus on story flow and construction for this VN, so we went for a mostly linear experience. For future project we'll see...

You know what I'll give this game a try it looks interesting

I hope we won't disappoint :3

Incredible,i love it.

Thanks for this lovely new VN!  Great story so far looking forward to seeing where things go!

I enjoyed the artwork so much I'm in the middle of doing some Ranzkai fanart and I noticed a minor discrepancy in his sprites.  He loses the lighter coloration of his hands/forearms when he crosses his arms.  Obviously not super important I wouldn't have even noticed if I wasn't using them as reference.  Just thought I'd let you know in case it went under the radar xD

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I'll take a look ASAP, thank for pointing it out... and thanks for the fanart! Can't wait to see it :)

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Amazing VN i liked so much, the story and characters, Héctor, Cadgan and the demon they're so handsome. 

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Loved it and eagerly awaiting the next update. I may be in the minority but I REALY hope the demon will be an alternate romanceable.

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Bestie Big Same im also praying for a Demon Daddy Rout

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cant wait for the next update!

Loved everything about the game so far! Only minor gripe I have is the new/updated journal entries not having some sort of icon or indication to make them easier to find as they pop up.

Can't wait for the next updates! Hope the subby badger gets the facefull of wolf ass he wants and deserves! 🙏😌

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why y'all gotta tear out my heart? I eagerly await more of this beautiful game.

Is there any nsfw?

Yes, but there is a censored mode to not show explicit content on screen.

Where is the censored mode?

In the options menu, display, dick type: censored.

wowy thx!!

I just finished the vn and wow is it amazing just trully trully amazing and i wana know is it the end or theres more?

More is coming very soon!

This had to be one of the best VNs I've played in a long time. The story, character design, spicy scenes, all of it was AMAZING!!! I cannot wait for the next update!

When the game is finished, will it be free for everyone?

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Our current idea is to have the game being paid only once it is complete. Contributing to patreon will entitle to the full version regardless for how long you've been subscribed.

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Wew child... Maybe I'm easy to please, but boy was this wonderful. I loved the writing, the art, the music, and I was salivating during that dream scene.

You guys are really on to something with this, and I can't wait to see more!

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This game was fantastic so far, and only just started getting interesting when the dreams went wild. excited to see where this is going.

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please give us the chose to let the demon help us or not

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the art is so well made

Thanks! :3

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I really like the vn its so good I wanna read it more but I reach the end so I hope the new chapter release fast BECAUSE I REALLY WANT TO KNOW SO BAD IF HE ACCEPT THE DEVIL OFFER

but please have some rest first we can wait very long even it's 1 year's will still wait so pls don't push yourself hard admin of this vn just relax and have some rest we cared about your health! ❤️

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Things are going to move quickly in the next update!

OMG IM SO EXCITED FOR IT!!! And thank you! have a great day Alpha0!!

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fall in love for this Vn, especially for his music ! A futur gallery for the next update to enjoy the music or the art ? 


Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update !

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You should make Manoel a romanceable character as well. I kinda like him, from his arrogance and obssecion, but with a mix of passion for medicine in the end.

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Can you add gallery to the game please.


And when you add NSFW scenes you could make it have movement in the scene

tweening on twine is really hard to do

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That's a great idea. I'm sure we'll have one down the line.

Spoilery joke













Devil: Cadgan has changed, became ice cold, but I can provide you with all the fire of passion you need. Of course, you can try to reignite the passion yourself, but it will prove futile. So, what will you choose? Cold ice of dead feelings, or everlasting fire of all pleasure you always yearned for?

Hector: Fire…

Devil: Good choice! No-

Hector, while raising torch: FIRE AND FORGIVE!!!

Devil: F*ck!

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LOVE THIS VN!!!

and I have a tentative theory.

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The sexy demon was Cargan this whole time or was him to some degree.  he was possessing him as a child when him and the main character first met.

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bro dont spoil

edit: nevermind you did put a spoiler warning but it was so easy to miss, sorry

Sorry, I'll see if I can edit it

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Ok that would make me want to go with the demon o_o

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Ok, I won't lie I didn't have any expectations for this VN when I started reading it because I had nothing to read and the VNs that I like are taking a while to update if not they are in a hiatus, but thank god I'm happy that I continued to read it.

Since this is the first update I don't have a lot of opinions, the designs and characters personalities are pretty standard if not slightly interesting for a medieval fantasy setting BUT the moment they spelled out Manoel's whole name I immediately got hooked. This is the second time a visual novel or well a furry visual novel at that, having references or (maybe) this time the story being or having a re-imagined world of Portugal/Spain or more specifically in the Iberian Peninsula

Also I love the idea that the lions seem to have portuguese and/or spanish influence as well, specially since Portugal before turning into an independent country, it was part of a kingdom named "Leão" which means Lion in english.

I'm quite excited by what's going to come and how the story it's going to progress.

Also, Obrigado pela representação do nosso país.

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If you want to take a peek at the game before downloading it, recently plover310 made a LP of the demo!

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Dang this came out of nowhere for me, you really hit the ground running what an amazing read.

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Okay Normally am not the biggest VN guy but love the story love the characters and am looking forward to more. The emotions i felt were great. The ending of this demo got me pretty excited especially with the reveal. Im a sucker for things like that and I am just hooked right now. I really do hope you get the funds and support to finish this cause it's really good.

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It's so well written!! The art is great, the story is emersive, strong vocabulary, good grammar, and provokes an emotional response. I'm very pleasantly surprised and will be waiting for the next update. Totally cool vn, great job!

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I'm glad you enjoyed the game! The plan is to update the demo until it reaches a certain point in Act II. The rest of the game will be paid.

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Well that's unfortunate but not wholly unexpected.  I'll quit while I'm ahead then so as to not become invested.

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Ive  seen playthroughs of this online. I wanted to see this since it was written by the author of Nerus. I enjoyed it a lot. I love the writing and I like the two main characters. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.

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It's enjoyable. Especially towards the end. My only slight complaint is that there are a few steps where it felt a bit rushed and a few times where there was a sense of disconnect. Like it was missing some dialogue.

For example I'd have liked to explore more their relationship in the hazeleaf picking scene. Now it felt like the transition didn't serve much purpose and could have been simply skipped by Hector saying "yes, I did it earlier" when Cadgan asked. It didn't carry the plot and neither did it explore their relationship.

Another example is when Cadgan turns down our badger and it transitions to "For now, apologize to Cadgan" scene. It's quite abrupt transition and the apology and Hector fleeing the scene would be more impactful if it was shown. Instead it felt like it was cut short.

There were also a few steps where I went "huh, are we still 9 years ago or did we already get back to present?" cases for me though these were resolved after a few clicks.

I could dig more of these up but to be honest I'm not sure if they are useful to you and cases like these are often a matter of preference anyway.

Also out of curiosity. Will there be top options for Hector? I know he likes being told what to do and has avoidant personality BUT the backstory with Cadgan also states it sparked something more adventurous and even rebellious in him. I hope this is also explored in the sex scenes, seeing that they are part of the plot.

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I'm actually not sure. I read this till 3 am half sleepy, and the lack of clear transitions gave me a surreal experience that was confusing in a good way honestly. And yeah it's mostly resolved after a few clicks for confirmation.

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I loved this from the start to finish!

I just have one question: During my playthrough I've noticed several pop-ups with "Journal being updated" but I can't find the journal anywhere. Is that a feature that will come in the future updates? Thanks!

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Glad you enjoyed it! The journal is on the pause menu, and on the quick menu at the bottom of the textbox on the PC version. It shows up as soon as you finish the first chapter.

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Oh, thank you so much! Now I can deep dive into the lore bits it has :D

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Loved reading this vn

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